tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4226709110419829326.post5668181074223650390..comments2023-07-15T08:59:25.648-04:00Comments on Lead Forward: Dreyton, Chapter 2 ExcerptGary C. Harrellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15490559142677570232noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4226709110419829326.post-18581154228128560562011-08-21T00:50:18.690-04:002011-08-21T00:50:18.690-04:00I think I read this one before, huh? Still good ev...I think I read this one before, huh? Still good even though. Babz got the whole book on the nose. It is about how society lost its way.Cedricknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4226709110419829326.post-64917221947197210032011-08-20T00:23:28.823-04:002011-08-20T00:23:28.823-04:00Outstanding writing as usual. Try not to let all o...Outstanding writing as usual. Try not to let all of the compliments go to your head though.Mashoudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01876573778162577155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4226709110419829326.post-80128378573070838322011-08-19T15:50:31.913-04:002011-08-19T15:50:31.913-04:00Gary your eloquent writing skills has me hungry fo...Gary your eloquent writing skills has me hungry for more and with many questions! <br /><br />*"the man had been a partner in a commodities trading house, successful in his profession until one day everything changed."<br /><br />QUESTION: What changed? Was it stress? schizophrenia or mental illness? Social schemas/ Social cognition/Empathy conflict with his spiritual side/soul? Psychic/Prophet ? WHAT WAS IT? <br /><br />Bryan & Patrick's relationship ? <br />Bryan's connection with the town crier? <br /><br />The conflicts : relationship -inner person conflict - commitment -empathy - power - spirit - biblical <br /><br />"The moment was poignant, but Bryan had to wonder why so many chose to ignore it."<br /><br />Reminded me of <br />"Life or Something Like It":street psychic with an impeccable record (at a brief glance)<br /><br />Dreyton, Chapter 2 Excerpt : I believe the direction is queationing how our society has loss sight of the meat and potatoes of our being...our soul...our spirit...our GOD. <br /><br />“Dreyton is that great city, and it has been judged! And soon Dreyton will fall—will fall, indeed!”..what will come of Dreyton and why?Babznoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4226709110419829326.post-177651646350588262011-08-18T17:04:34.316-04:002011-08-18T17:04:34.316-04:00I like how there is not a lot of violence in this ...I like how there is not a lot of violence in this scene. When are you going to wrap up the rewrites and get this book publish?Shannonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4226709110419829326.post-66832478916717704432011-08-18T13:18:36.650-04:002011-08-18T13:18:36.650-04:00Good stuff, G. I am going to hold you to your prom...Good stuff, G. I am going to hold you to your promise about this blog though.Digger in LVnoreply@blogger.com